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From: Hennes To: Jake Underfield Subject: Reply Thank you for the invitation. I'm glad to hear that you're organize a party, that sounds fabulous but I'm sorry I couldn't come that day because I have some things to do in my schedule, so I suggesting my assistant come to the party on my behalf. I would love to catch up another time. I would love to see the new product on your next visit to the company.
From:
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Hennes


To: Jake
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Underfield


Subject: Reply

Thank you for the invitation. I'm glad to hear that you're
Consider using a past participle here: "organized".
organize
a party, that sounds fabulous
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but
I'm sorry I couldn't
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come
that day
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because
I have
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some
things to do in my schedule,
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so
Did you mean "I'm suggesting", "I am suggesting", or "I was suggesting"?
I suggesting
my assistant
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come
to the party on my behalf. I would
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love
to catch up another time.
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I
would
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love
to
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see
the new product on your
next
visit to the
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company
.
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IELTS essay Write a reply to Jake Underfield’s email

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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