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what is you educational goal and what you need to do to achieve it?

what is you educational goal and what you need to do to achieve it? rb2Kl
My educational goal is having good knowledge of the subject I learned at university and improving my English. First of all, I must learn hard and improve my soft skills. I’ll try to do that for the next four years in my university. Second, my short-term goal is getting an Ielts certificate when I am a first-year student. Nowadays, English is one of the most popular languages all over the world. It is also used commonly in my major. I think it is very important to my future job. Another reason is that I want to study aboard. To achieve my goals, I learn it through many different ways. I usually study from my teachers at my university, or my friends and my mobile phone and so on… I’m more receptive when I listen to audio or read articles from the BBC learning English app. I also practice speaking and writing English from many conversations from the English Conversations app. My target is twenty new words each day now. I also listen to English song and many conversations frequently to learn how the English speak their own language. I believe that it’s very useful. I hope I can get an Ielts certificate and master this language as soon as possible.
My educational goal is having
good
knowledge of the subject I learned at university and improving my English.
First of all
, I
must
learn
hard
and
improve
my soft
skills
. I’ll try to do that for the
next
four years in my university. Second, my short-term goal is getting an
Ielts
certificate when I am a
first
-year student. Nowadays, English is one of the most popular languages all over the world. It is
also
used
commonly
in my major. I
think
it is
very
important
to my future job. Another reason is that I want to study aboard. To achieve my goals, I learn it through
many
different
ways. I
usually
study from my teachers at my university, or my friends and my mobile phone and
so
on… I’m more receptive when I listen to audio or read articles from the BBC learning English app.
I
also
practice speaking and writing English from
many
conversations from the English Conversations app. My target is twenty new words each day
now
. I
also
listen to English song and
many
conversations
frequently
to learn how the English speak their
own
language. I believe that it’s
very
useful.
I
hope I can
get
an
Ielts
certificate and master this language as
soon
as possible.
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IELTS essay what is you educational goal and what you need to do to achieve it?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
210 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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