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What are the advantages and disadvantages for students using cellphones at school?

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Mobile phones are known as cellular phone, wireless phone, or cellular telephone, which is a little portable radio telephone. It is a combination of two technologies, which are telephone, invented by Alexander Graham Bell in 1876 and radio, whereas invention of radio was done by Nikola Tesla. The mobile phones can be used to communicate over long distances without wires. The top-flight phones available now have the processing power and storage available in desktop computers just four to five years ago. The mobile phone is rapidly becoming the uber device which the one that seems to have it all and becomes even more essential. It also already started functioning as more than just communication devices. Mobile serves as watches and…show more content…Use of mobile phone in student’s life is not limited to speaking with others, it is being used in making video, recording information and transmitting it to another phone or computer was being done by a computer. Besides that, other facilities like online chatting, conferencing, sending text, transferring MMS information by a mobile phone are compatible with computer. This features plays a vital role in the stressful and fast-paced life of a student. Mobile phones can be a helpful academic tool or a harmful academic disruption depending upon the attitude and use pattern of the student owner. But there also some advantages of using mobile phones which are, it’s portability, multifunctional, mobile phone as a communication tool, useful applications for students, can release stress. Meanwhile the disadvantages are causes addiction, a risk to student’s health, wastage and its bad influences to students. Besides that,
Mobile
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phones
are known
as cellular
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phone
, wireless
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phone
, or cellular telephone, which is a
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little
portable
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radio telephone
. It is a combination of two technologies, which are telephone, invented by Alexander Graham Bell in 1876 and radio, whereas invention of radio
was done
by Nikola Tesla. The mobile
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phones
can be
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used
to communicate over long distances without wires. The top-flight
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phones
available
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now
have the processing power and storage available in desktop computers
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just
four to five years ago.
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The
mobile
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is
rapidly
becoming the
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uber
device which the one that seems to have it all and becomes even more essential. It
also
already
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started
functioning as more than
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just
communication devices. Mobile serves as
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watches
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Use
of mobile
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phone
in
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student’s
life is not limited to speaking with others, it is being
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used
in making video, recording information and transmitting it to another
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phone
or computer was
being done
by a computer.
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that, other facilities like online chatting, conferencing, sending text, transferring MMS information by a mobile
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phone
are compatible with computer.
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plays
a vital role in the stressful and
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fast
-paced life of a
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student
. Mobile
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phones
can be a helpful academic tool or a harmful academic disruption depending upon the attitude and
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use
pattern of the
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student
owner.
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But
there
also
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some
advantages of using mobile
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phones
which are, it’s portability, multifunctional, mobile
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phone
as a communication tool, useful applications for
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students
, can release
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stress
.
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the disadvantages are causes addiction, a
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risk
to
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student’s
health, wastage and its
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influences to
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students
.
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that,
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IELTS essay What are the advantages and disadvantages for students using cellphones at school?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
265 words
5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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