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Write a process showing how to do, make, use or fix something

Write a process showing how to do, make, use or fix something ORAxj
The apidemic makes shopping more limited and difficult but thanks to the evolution of information technology, shopping is very easy due to the fact that more and more shopping apps appear. So how can we use it to shopping? First, you download some shopping apps like Lazada, Shopee and Tiki on Appstore or Google Play Store. Second, you enter app and log in your account if you have and sign up your account if you don’t have. Then you search for the product you want to buy and see the price, reviews of it from previous buyers. Afterwards, you add it to cart after you have selected the best product and click “Check out” in the lower right corner. Subsequently, you enter the shipping address, choose a shipping unit and a payment method. Finally, you press the order confirmation button and order will be delivered to you. In conclusion, shopping apps make shopping much more convenient and easier.
The
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apidemic
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makes
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shopping
more limited and difficult
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but
thanks to the evolution of information technology,
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shopping
is
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very
easy due to the fact that more and more
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shopping
apps appear.
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So
how can we
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use
it to
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shopping
?
First
, you download
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some
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shopping
apps like
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Lazada
,
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Shopee
and
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Tiki
on
If you mean the Apple digital distribution platform, use "App Store". For Amazon, use "Amazon Appstore".
Appstore
or Google Play Store. Second, you enter app and log in your account if you have and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
up your account if you don’t have. Then you search for the product you want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the price, reviews of it from previous buyers. Afterwards, you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
it to cart after you have selected the best product and click “
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Check
out” in the lower right corner.
Subsequently
, you enter the shipping address, choose a shipping unit and a payment method.
Finally
, you press the order confirmation button and order will
be delivered
to you.
In conclusion
,
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shopping
apps
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
much more convenient and easier.
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IELTS essay Write a process showing how to do, make, use or fix something

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158 words
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