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Some people think that making noise during election time should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that making noise during election time should be banned. wOL9N
In modern times, the issue of making noise during elections has become highly controversial. Perhaps there are those who believe that creating sound should be banned, and others feel that it should not. In this essay, I will examine both views of the arguments and provide my overall opinion. Generally speaking, there is a wide range of reasons why people believe that making noise during the election should be banned. Perhaps the main reason why people in favor of creating intolerable sound during the election should deny is because sound pollution. It is impossible to endure for anyone when they are miking loudly as a part of their election advertisement. It will not bring a single vote because it has been irritable for voters, although they don't have any concern about this issue. Many health issues such as headaches, boredom is caused by creating intolerable sounds. Many students cannot concentrate on their studies, and newborn babies cannot sleep enough for this reason. On the other hand, as a part of a democratic society, they have the right to make noise during election time. Despite these arguments, many people feel that making noise should not be banned during the election for several reasons. Among the candidates to the election, they believe that it is the part of election advertisement, take it as a competition like who can make more noise. They are plowing ahead their election advertisement by depending on theory - "More Marketing More Vote. " In conclusion, it must be said that making noise during election time has become an intricate issue with no easy solution. Having considered both sides of the argument, I feel that it should be banned.
In modern times, the
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of making
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noise
during
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elections
has become
highly
controversial. Perhaps there are those who believe that creating
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sound
should be
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banned
,
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and others
feel that it should not. In this essay, I will examine both views of the arguments and provide my
overall
opinion.

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speaking, there is a wide range of reasons why
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people
believe that making
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noise
during the
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election
should be
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banned
. Perhaps the main reason why
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people
in favor of creating intolerable
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sound
during the
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election
should deny is
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because
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sound
pollution. It is impossible to endure for anyone when they are miking
loudly
as a part of their
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election
advertisement. It will not bring a single vote
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because
it has been irritable for voters, although they don't have any concern about this
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issue
.
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Many
health
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issues
such as headaches, boredom
is caused
by creating intolerable
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sounds
.
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Many
students cannot concentrate on their studies, and newborn babies cannot sleep
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enough
for this reason
.

On the other hand
, as a part of a democratic society, they have the right to
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make
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noise
during
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election
time. Despite these arguments,
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many
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people
feel that making
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noise
should not be
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banned
during the
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election
for several reasons. Among the candidates to the
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election
, they believe that it is the part of
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election
advertisement, take it as a competition like who can
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make
more
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noise
. They are plowing ahead their
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election
advertisement by depending on theory
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"
More Marketing More Vote.
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In conclusion
, it
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must
be said
that making
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noise
during
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election
time has become an intricate
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issue
with no easy solution. Having considered both sides of the argument, I feel that it should be
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banned
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that making noise during election time should be banned.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
281 words
5.5
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