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When it comes to cups, plates or glasses with engraved patterns, we cannot forget a business named "Minh Long Ceramics". This is a famous family business in Binh Duong. They succeed with popular works in the country noted by the state and abroad. Minh Long ceramics is present in foreign markets, leading by France, then Germany, Japan, Netherlands, Czechoslovakia, . . and the US. Minh Long I ceramics is one of the first Vietnamese entpes to win the title of National Brand and the company's products continue to be honored in the following years. Minh Long ceramics still retains the traditional pottery line left by his father imbued with Vietnamese cultural identity with motifs such as rural village One Pillar Pagoda Hoan Kiem lake western rivers clearly depicted on each product
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entpes
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Minh
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Long
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IELTS essay Successful of family business

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
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