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Write a pharagraph about the traditional village in VietNam

Write a pharagraph about the traditional village in VietNam XlMYP
Bat Trang ceramic village is one of the most famous traditional village in Vietnam. Like the name, Bat Trang ceramic village is a place where produces many beautiful pots, dishes, bowls, vases, . . . . These products are also exported to many foreign countries. We have two original stories of this village, and when you visit Bat Trang, local people can tell you about it. In fact, Bat Trang has changed from a normal ceramic and pottery village into a famous ceramic and pottery center until now. If you visit the nothern in Vietnam, you will be able to visit Bat Trang village. There is a "spirit food" of Vietnamese people, and foreigener can also enjoy it with us. Bat Trang village has become an inspiration, special value and cutural heritage in Vietnam since time immemorial.
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ceramic
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traditional
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village
in Vietnam. Like the name,
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Trang
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ceramic
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village
is a place where produces
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many
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beautiful
pots, dishes, bowls, vases
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These products are
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many
foreign countries. We have two original stories of this
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village
, and when you visit
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Trang
, local
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people
can
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tell
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has
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changed
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ceramic
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village
into a
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famous
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ceramic
and pottery center until
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now
. If you visit the
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nothern
in Vietnam, you will be able to visit
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Trang
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village
. There is a
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spirit food
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of Vietnamese
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people
, and
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foreigener
can
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enjoy it with us.
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has become an inspiration, special value and
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cutural
heritage in Vietnam since time immemorial.
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IELTS essay Write a pharagraph about the traditional village in VietNam

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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