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It’s essential to maintain your physical health throughout this challenging period. This will not only benefit you in the long run. But it will also assist you in the fight against COVID-19 if you get it

It’s essential to maintain your physical health throughout this challenging period. This will not only benefit you in the long run. But it will also assist you in the fight against COVID-19 if you get it It’s essential to maintain your physical health throughout this challenging period. This will not only benefit you in the long run. But it will also assist you in the fight against COVID-19 if you get it

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 it will also
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’s essential to maintain your physical health throughout this challenging period. This will not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 benefit you in the long run. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 it will also
 assist you in the fight against COVID-19 if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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IELTS essay It’s essential to maintain your physical health throughout this challenging period. This will not only benefit you in the long run. But it will also assist you in the fight against COVID-19 if you get it

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

71 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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