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Write a passage to your penfriend to introduce to him some interest places in your country

Write a passage to your penfriend to introduce to him some interest places in your country aJb2X

From: Dat Le To: Daniel Subject: Place of interest in my country Dear my friend, I know that you are going to visit my gorgeous country in the next few days. So then let me introduce to you some of the best places in Vietnam. There are countless tourist attractions in my nation, such as Vung Tau, Ha Noi, Quang Binh, and so on. But the one I think that will impress you the most is Hue - the ancient capital. This place is well-known not just only it's beautiful but people here are also extremely lovely with their gentle, sincere personality and sweet voice, affectionate. In Hue, there are various places to hang out. If you love history, Hue Citadel is a place you absolutely must not miss. This place converges the peak architectural beauty of the Nguyen feudal era, built hundreds of years ago with a huge area, there are more than 100 splendid architectural works arranged in harmony. And if you love the bustle rather than the ancient, Dong Ba market is an extremely suitable place for my friend. This is a bustling Hue tourist destination, located between Truong Tien Bridge and Gia Hoi Bridge, also the largest market in Hue with a lot of stalls and items for sale. I am sure that after going to all the places that I mentioned above, you will have the most wonderful day of your life, and this feeling will be an unforgettable memory for you. Okay, that's all, if you want to go more, I will suggest you when you come here. Waiting for you to come here Best wishes, Dat Le

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Best wishes,

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