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Write a passage to your penfriend to introduce to him some interest places in your country

Write a passage to your penfriend to introduce to him some interest places in your country aJb2X
From: Dat Le To: Daniel Subject: Place of interest in my country Dear my friend, I know that you are going to visit my gorgeous country in the next few days. So then let me introduce to you some of the best places in Vietnam. There are countless tourist attractions in my nation, such as Vung Tau, Ha Noi, Quang Binh, and so on. But the one I think that will impress you the most is Hue - the ancient capital. This place is well-known not just only it's beautiful but people here are also extremely lovely with their gentle, sincere personality and sweet voice, affectionate. In Hue, there are various places to hang out. If you love history, Hue Citadel is a place you absolutely must not miss. This place converges the peak architectural beauty of the Nguyen feudal era, built hundreds of years ago with a huge area, there are more than 100 splendid architectural works arranged in harmony. And if you love the bustle rather than the ancient, Dong Ba market is an extremely suitable place for my friend. This is a bustling Hue tourist destination, located between Truong Tien Bridge and Gia Hoi Bridge, also the largest market in Hue with a lot of stalls and items for sale. I am sure that after going to all the places that I mentioned above, you will have the most wonderful day of your life, and this feeling will be an unforgettable memory for you. Okay, that's all, if you want to go more, I will suggest you when you come here. Waiting for you to come here Best wishes, Dat Le
From:
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Dat
Le

To: Daniel

Subject:
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Place
of interest in my country

Dear my friend,

I know that you are going to visit my gorgeous country in the
next
few days.
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So
then
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let
me introduce to you
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some
of the best
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places
in Vietnam.

There are countless tourist attractions in my nation, such as
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Vung
Tau, Ha
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Noi
,
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Quang
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Binh
, and
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so
on.
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But
the one I
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think
that will impress you the most is
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Hue
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the ancient capital. This
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place
is well-known not
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just
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only
it's
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beautiful
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but
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people
here are
also
extremely
lovely with their gentle, sincere personality and sweet voice, affectionate. In
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Hue
, there are various
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places
to hang out. If you
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love
history,
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Hue
Citadel is a
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place
you
absolutely
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must
not miss. This
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place
converges the peak architectural beauty of the Nguyen feudal era, built hundreds of years ago with a huge area, there are more than 100 splendid architectural works arranged in harmony. And if you
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love
the bustle
rather
than the ancient, Dong Ba market is an
extremely
suitable
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place
for my friend. This is a bustling
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Hue
tourist destination, located between
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Truong
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Tien
Bridge and
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Gia
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Hoi
Bridge,
also
the largest market in
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Hue
with
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a lot of
stalls and items for sale. I am sure that after going to all the
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places
that I mentioned above, you will have the most wonderful day of your life, and this feeling will be an unforgettable memory for you.

Okay, that's all, if you want to go more, I will suggest you when you
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come
here.

Waiting for you to
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come
here

Best wishes,

Did you mean "that" or "date"?
Dat
Le
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IELTS essay Write a passage to your penfriend to introduce to him some interest places in your country

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
273 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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