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A discussion about environment pollution advantage and disadvantage

A discussion about environment pollution advantage and disadvantage BgDpa
Althought environment contamination is a big concern for all world so it has only disadvantages and I will explain all drawbacks in upcoming paragraphs First and foremost is that water pollution very dangerous for humanity. It is because water pollution main reason of harmfull disease and people lost their precious life because of water pollution. Another point that traffic congestion which is prominent cause of noise pollution and because of noise pollution situation become more deleterious. People suffer from lots of problems because of their private vehicle. Furthermore, lots of Impartive spieces are verge on the extinction because of water pollution, and it main drawbacks for all people because biodiversity very important to maintain food chain on this globe. Therefore all kinds of pollution only a drawback rather than beneficial. To concluded. It is fact that pollution a major concern for everyone and most of the people lost their life because of this.
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environment contamination is a
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concern for all world
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disadvantages and I will
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explain
all drawbacks in upcoming paragraphs

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and foremost is that
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water
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pollution
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very
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dangerous
for humanity. It is
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because
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water
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pollution
main reason of
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harmfull
disease and
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people
lost their precious life
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because
of
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water
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pollution
. Another point that traffic congestion which is prominent cause of noise
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pollution
and
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because
of noise
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pollution
situation become more deleterious.
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People
suffer from lots of problems
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because
of their private vehicle.
Furthermore
, lots of
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Impartive
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spieces
are verge on the extinction
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because
of
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water
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pollution
, and
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it
main drawbacks for all
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people
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because
biodiversity
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very
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important
to maintain food chain on this globe.
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Therefore
all kinds of
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pollution
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only
a drawback
rather
than beneficial.
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To concluded
. It is fact that
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pollution
a major concern for everyone and most of the
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people
lost their
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life
because of this
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IELTS essay A discussion about environment pollution advantage and disadvantage

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
153 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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