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Some people think that sports are important but other consider that sports are nothing more than hobby.

Some people think that sports are important but other consider that sports are nothing more than hobby. qRoOP
Nowadays a lot of people think that sport are very essential but other people think sport are nothing leisure activity. In my opinion actually sport rather important. This is true fact. Nowadays a lot of people sport across utilize a variety ways. For example first of all sport should for health. All people spend must with sport every day. Some people across sport find much money. Currently my country sport is very evolution. Espically boks sport type. This athletes acquaint Uzbekistan to the world. There are a lot of sport type, the most important boks, swimming, running, and so on. Playing sport advertise a significant role in society. There are many benefits which are associated with the people regularly involved in any of sports. The other said of coins is that now some people sports are simply hobby. Many people spend with sport leisure time. I would believe it has significant contribute to the society. Nowadays my government sport are very associated entertainment in addition is relevant to general health and well being. In this stressful world physical activity are chose to assist human enable sport are no exception. In my conclusion all word population should spend with sport. This is very helpful for health.
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leisure time. I would believe it has significant contribute to the society. Nowadays my
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associated entertainment
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well being
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are no exception.

In my conclusion all word population should spend with
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. This is
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IELTS essay Some people think that sports are important but other consider that sports are nothing more than hobby.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
205 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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