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Living abroad need language. Agree or disagree?

Living abroad need language. Agree or disagree? kgmkR
It is commonly believed that living in countries where people speak other language can have some problems in working and shopping. I completely agree with this statement. And in this essay I will discuss about my point of views. Now adays, a lot of person who, from developing countries, or immigrating to developed countries. Most of developed countries, citizens, such as Europe's and Americans can speak English fluently and do communication is based on spatial language. It is mandatory for immigrants who are in land. Just pick English. If they don't have ability to speak English, they will not obtain jobs, and earn money. For example, there were a number of PA professional engineers who were qualified in computer. Do they were well informed. They didn't obtain a carrier. Because of jobless. They were leaving their heart. In Angular, not only language skills, has a direct effect on finding job, but also all the activities and communications are based on it. In the other word, leaving, education, shopping, and so on, are depended on language ability immigrants can have any religion, and communication. They will be isolated and will not be succeed in life, perfectly. There are a lot of people who are just able to continue to your education in Europe, because they haven't learned English. So, when they attend to university or faciliate faculties. They are referred to Psalm, English Institute, which have been established for low level English speakers. In addition to qualified English speakers have a lot of problems in shopping, and it leads to some problems when they want to spend the money. To sum up, in my opinion, having language ability is compulsory for any immigrants who would like to immigrate to a developed country. If they can speak fluently in their language. If they can't speak fluently in other language. they will not have acceptable live there.
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where
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people
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speak
other
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language
can have
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some
problems in working and shopping. I completely
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agree
with this statement. And in this essay I will
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discuss about my
point of views.
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Now
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,
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a lot of person
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, from developing
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countries
, or immigrating to developed
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countries
. Most of developed
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countries
, citizens, such as Europe's and Americans can
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speak
English
fluently
and do communication
is based
on spatial
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language
. It is mandatory for immigrants
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who
are in land.
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Just
pick English. If they don't have ability to
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speak
English, they will not obtain jobs, and earn money.
For example
, there were a number of PA professional engineers
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who
were qualified
in computer. Do they
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were
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well informed
. They didn't obtain a carrier.
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of jobless. They were leaving their heart. In Angular, not
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only
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language
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skills
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but
also
all the activities and communications
are based
on it. In the other word, leaving, education, shopping, and
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so
on,
are depended
on
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language
ability immigrants can have any religion, and communication. They will
be isolated
and will not be
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succeed
in life,
perfectly
. There are
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are
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able to continue to your education in Europe,
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because
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, when they attend to university or
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faciliate
faculties. They
are referred
to Psalm, English Institute, which have
been established
for low level English speakers.
In addition
to qualified English speakers have
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a lot of
problems in shopping, and it leads to
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some
problems when they want to spend the money. To sum up, in my opinion, having
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language
ability is compulsory for any immigrants
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who
would like to immigrate to a developed
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country
.
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they can
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speak
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in their
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language
.
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If
they can't
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speak
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in other
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they
will not have acceptable
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IELTS essay Living abroad need language. Agree or disagree?

Essay
  American English
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