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Write a pararaph descriptive my hometown

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Ca Mau is my hometown, which is one of the most wonderful places in the Mekong Delta. This is a special place in my heart, and I will always be proud that I was born and raised here. Ca Mau is located in the south of Viet Nam. It is a small province where people earn a living through rice cultivation and shrimp farming. In contrast to the bustling city, my hometown has a peaceful and beautiful character. Ca Mau is well-known for its numerous tourist attractions. For instance, U Minh Ha National Park, Khai Long Beach, Thi Tuong Lake. In addition, nature provides many resources, such as forests, oceans, and various aquatic animals. My hometown has an incredibly clean and pleasant atmosphere. The people here are sociable, generous, and open-minded. Although the people here are poor in material, the sincere and simple feelings towards everyone are incalculable. I cherish my hometown and the people who live here, and I believe that no matter how far I go, my hometown will always be a place I can return to. Ca Mau is a perfect destination, and I adore my hometown.
Ca
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Mau
is my
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hometown
, which is one of the most wonderful places in the Mekong Delta. This is a special place in my heart, and I will always be proud that I
was born
and raised here. Ca
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Mau
is located
in the south of
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Viet
Nam. It is a
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small
province where
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people
earn a living through rice cultivation and shrimp farming.
In contrast
to the bustling city, my
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hometown
has a peaceful and
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beautiful
character. Ca
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Mau
is well-known for its numerous tourist attractions.
For instance
, U
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Minh
Ha National Park,
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Khai
Long Beach,
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Thi
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Tuong
Lake.
In addition
, nature provides
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many
resources, such as forests, oceans, and various aquatic animals. My
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hometown
has an
incredibly
clean and pleasant atmosphere. The
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people
here are sociable, generous, and open-minded. Although the
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people
here are poor in material, the sincere and simple feelings towards everyone
The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "is", "was", "were".
are
incalculable. I cherish my
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hometown
and the
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people
who
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live
here, and I believe that no matter how far I go, my
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hometown
will always be a place I can return to. Ca
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Mau
is a perfect destination, and I adore my
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hometown
.
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IELTS essay Write a pararaph descriptive my hometown

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
190 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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