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Write a descriptive paragraph about your hometown

Write a descriptive paragraph about your hometown BwPBd
Hau Giang - a Vietnamese province is where I was born and grown up. I have a special affection for it. Located on the West side of the Hau river, Hau Giang stands out for many beautiful features such as floating markets, historic sites and local foods. Previously, Hau Giang was very under development on many issues, for instance infrastructure, specific products, . . . But Today, Hau Giang province is very develope: a lot of urban areas and school were built, especially is a solar power plant in Hoa An is a big step forward for Hau Giang province. In addition, fruit is also very popular here. There are Cau Duc pineapples, Nam Roi pomelos, . . . In addition, the province also has fishing specialties such as Thac Lac fish tastes good and is love by many people. The province also has many historical sites. For example, Uncle Ho's temple, Tam Vu relic, . . . Hau Giang - home of immense rice fields laden with grain, busy canals boats, hard, creative and hospitable people. I am very happy to live on this land. In the future, no matter what I do, no matter where I go, the image of Hau Giang will be hard to fade in my heart.
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was
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pomelos
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home of immense rice fields laden with grain, busy canals boats,
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, creative and hospitable
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IELTS essay Write a descriptive paragraph about your hometown

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
212 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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