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My hometown is Ca Mau, where I was born

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Ca Mau is my hometown. Furthermore, it is the most beautiful place in my heart. I love and am proud of Ca Mau. I live in Phu Thuan commune, Phu Tan district, Ca Mau province. This place has many stunning sceneries, rich and fresh specialties. Phu Thuan where I live is a peaceful small countryside, 38 kilometers from Ca Mau city. Not only Phu Tan is home to fresh and delicious specialties such as dried fish Khoai (Ca Kho Khoai), Mam Ba Khia, crab (Cua)… But also famous scenic places: Dam Thi Tuong, Khu Can Cu Xeo Duoc, Biet Khu Hai Yen Binh Hung. In addition, I feel local people are very cute, friendly and hospitable. That is the reason why anyone who went to Ca Mau wouldn't want to leave. Ca Mau is a peaceful and wonderful land. Besides, I am also very proud of the illustrious historical sites and I will try to preserve it. Although I am living and working in another place, my hometown Ca Mau is still the place I love the most, and the place to return to.
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commune,
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Tan district, Ca
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stunning sceneries, rich and fresh specialties.
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Tan is home to fresh and delicious specialties such as dried fish
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(Ca
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,
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Can Cu
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cute, friendly and hospitable.
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Mau
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. Ca
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Mau
is a peaceful and wonderful land.
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proud of the illustrious historical sites and I will try to preserve it. Although I am living and working in another
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, my hometown Ca
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IELTS essay My hometown is Ca Mau, where I was born

Essay
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184 words
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