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My hometown is Ca Mau, where I was born

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Ca Mau is my hometown. Furthermore, it is the most beautiful place in my heart. I love and am proud of Ca Mau. I live in Phu Thuan commune, Phu Tan district, Ca Mau province. This place has many stunning sceneries, rich and fresh specialties. Phu Thuan where I live is a peaceful small countryside, 38 kilometers from Ca Mau city. Not only Phu Tan is home to fresh and delicious specialties such as dried fish Khoai (Ca Kho Khoai), Mam Ba Khia, crab (Cua)… But also famous scenic places: Dam Thi Tuong, Khu Can Cu Xeo Duoc, Biet Khu Hai Yen Binh Hung. In addition, I feel local people are very cute, friendly and hospitable. That is the reason why anyone who went to Ca Mau wouldn't want to leave. Ca Mau is a peaceful and wonderful land. Besides, I am also very proud of the illustrious historical sites and I will try to preserve it. Although I am living and working in another place, my hometown Ca Mau is still the place I love the most, and the place to return to.
Ca
Mau
is my hometown.
Furthermore
, it is the most
beautiful
place
in my heart. I
love
and am proud of Ca
Mau
. I
live
in
Phu
Thuan
commune,
Phu
Tan district, Ca
Mau
province. This
place
has
many
stunning sceneries, rich and fresh specialties.
Phu
Thuan
where I
live
is a peaceful
small
countryside, 38 kilometers from Ca
Mau
city. Not
only
Phu
Tan is home to fresh and delicious specialties such as dried fish
Khoai
(Ca
Kho
Khoai
), Mam Ba
Khia
, crab (
Cua
)…
But
also
famous
scenic
places
: Dam
Thi
Tuong
,
Khu
Can Cu
Xeo
Duoc
,
Biet
Khu
Hai
Yen
Binh
Hung.
In addition
, I feel local
people
are
very
cute, friendly and hospitable.
That is
the reason why anyone who went to Ca
Mau
wouldn't want to
leave
. Ca
Mau
is a peaceful and wonderful land.
Besides
, I am
also
very
proud of the illustrious historical sites and I will try to preserve it. Although I am living and working in another
place
, my hometown Ca
Mau
is
still
the
place
I
love
the most, and the
place
to return to.
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IELTS essay My hometown is Ca Mau, where I was born

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