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Write a paragraphs about a gift you have received from yoir parents

Write a paragraphs about a gift you have received from yoir parents 8G2lG
My 19th day has just passed with lots of fun and meaningful gifts. It belongs to the Honda brand painted in black. That motorcycle has an elegant and casual look, which is very suitable for someone like me. Operation is also very easy, I just need to turn on the gas and hold the brake to start the engine. The brakes are also light and easy to use; very solid and secure, making it easy for me to stop when I want to. Besides, I also use a lot of fuel so it would be nice if I could save more gas. For a roommate like me, having a car like it is essential. Without it, I wouldn't be able to go home as often. So I am very grateful that my parents will definitely keep this gift.
My 19th day has
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passed with lots of fun and meaningful gifts. It belongs to the Honda brand painted in black. That motorcycle has an elegant and casual look, which is
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suitable for someone like me. Operation is
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easy, I
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need to turn on the gas and hold the brake to
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the engine. The brakes are
also
light and easy to
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;
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solid and secure, making it easy for me to
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stop
when I want to.
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use
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a lot of
fuel
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it would be nice if I could save more gas. For a roommate like me, having a car like it is essential. Without it, I wouldn't be able to go home as
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often
.
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I am
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grateful that my parents will definitely
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this gift.

IELTS essay Write a paragraphs about a gift you have received from yoir parents

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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