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write a paragraph to tell your friend about your working day

write a paragraph to tell your friend about your working day 75Gp3

After a day with a lot of work, exercises, . . . you must be tired and need time to relax. So what do you do in your free time: cooking, shopping or watching TV? In my free time, I like reading books because they are useful and interesting. Reading books helps me improve my knowledge of all areas that I want to research. Like most men, I love football. So in my free time, I usually play football to increase my overall health. Besides, when I have more time, I go out with my friends to relax after a hard-working day. That is how I spend my free time, what’s yours?

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must
be tired
 and need You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 to relax. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 what do you do in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplimentary
free
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time
: cooking, shopping or watching TV? In my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplimentary
free
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, I like reading books This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are useful and interesting. Reading books This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my knowledge of all areas that I want to research. Like most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 football. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 in my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplimentary
free
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time
, I usually
 play football to increase my overall
 health. Besides
, when I have more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
, I go out with my friends to relax after a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-working day. That is
 how I spend my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplimentary
free
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time
, what’s yours? 