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advantage and this advantage of gap year

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Education have been one of the most important things to the youths in their life times. Some students belives that gap year helps them to have an experience, making money and travel around to the world to gain their knowledge about the life and their future job. On the other side, some educators pefer to continue their education continuesly and after that make important decision in their lifes. In this contexts evey person has their on opinion about the merits and drawbacks of gape year in their lifetime.
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IELTS essay advantage and this advantage of gap year

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  American English
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88 words
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