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write a paragraph to tell your friend about a person you know well

write a paragraph to tell your friend about a person you know well KG9q9
In my life, I have met a lot of people and also had to part with a lot, but there is one person who is always by my side, supporting me. That's my dad, a very important person to me and someone I know well. His name is Bao and he is a farmer. Not only is my father but he also is my best friend, my teacher. My father is a tall man, he has a huge and a lot of fat belly. He looks strict and hot-temper but I know he is a kind person. Whenever I have problems, he’ll lend a sympathetic ear and give me some advice. Although he works hard, he never complains and always supports me. For me, he is a hero who is stronger than everyone. I feel happy and proud to be my father’s son. I’ll try harder to make my father proud of me.
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there is one person who is always by my side, supporting me. That's my dad, a
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person to me and someone I know well. His name is
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and he is a farmer. Not
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is my best friend, my teacher. My
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father
is a tall
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man
, he has a huge and
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belly. He looks strict and hot-temper
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I know he is a kind person. Whenever I have problems, he’ll lend a sympathetic ear and give me
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advice. Although he works
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hard
, he never complains and always supports me. For me, he is a hero who is stronger than everyone. I feel happy and proud to be my
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son. I’ll try harder to
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proud of me.

IELTS essay write a paragraph to tell your friend about a person you know well

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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