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write a paragraph to tell your friend about a person you know well

write a paragraph to tell your friend about a person you know well KG9q9

In my life, I have met a lot of people and also had to part with a lot, but there is one person who is always by my side, supporting me. That's my dad, a very important person to me and someone I know well. His name is Bao and he is a farmer. Not only is my father but he also is my best friend, my teacher. My father is a tall man, he has a huge and a lot of fat belly. He looks strict and hot-temper but I know he is a kind person. Whenever I have problems, he’ll lend a sympathetic ear and give me some advice. Although he works hard, he never complains and always supports me. For me, he is a hero who is stronger than everyone. I feel happy and proud to be my father’s son. I’ll try harder to make my father proud of me.

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