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write a paragraph to listed the reasons for water pollution?

write a paragraph to listed the reasons for water pollution? o606b
water pollution is one of the big problems about environment in the world. Contaminated water can have many different causes. In agriculture, people often use chemicals to kill weeds and inserts. the sewage with poison is dumped into rivers, lakes. . . In industry, the waste which discharges into environment is untreated and toxic. Besides, there are some people are not responsible for the environment. They used too many plastic bags and throw them every where. there are some places, even at the beaches, water is full of trash. There are many common reasons to make water polluted
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water
pollution is one of the
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big
problems about environment in the world.

Contaminated
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water
can have
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many
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different
causes. In agriculture,
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people
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often
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use
chemicals to kill weeds and inserts.
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the
sewage with poison
is dumped
into rivers, lakes.
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.
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.
In industry, the waste which discharges into environment
is untreated
and toxic.
Besides
, there are
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some
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people
are not responsible for the environment. They
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used
too
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many
plastic bags and throw them
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every where
.
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there
are
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some
places, even at the beaches,
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water
is full of trash. There are
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many
common reasons to
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make
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water
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polluted

IELTS essay write a paragraph to listed the reasons for water pollution?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
97 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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