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write a paragraph to listed the reasons for water pollution?

write a paragraph to listed the reasons for water pollution? o606b

water pollution is one of the big problems about environment in the world. Contaminated water can have many different causes. In agriculture, people often use chemicals to kill weeds and inserts. the sewage with poison is dumped into rivers, lakes. . . In industry, the waste which discharges into environment is untreated and toxic. Besides, there are some people are not responsible for the environment. They used too many plastic bags and throw them every where. there are some places, even at the beaches, water is full of trash. There are many common reasons to make water polluted

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWater
water
 pollution is one of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 problems about environment in the world.

Contaminated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 can have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 causes. In agriculture, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 chemicals to kill weeds and inserts. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 sewage with poison is dumped
 into rivers, lakes. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 In industry, the waste which discharges into environment is untreated
 and toxic. Besides
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are not responsible for the environment. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 plastic bags and throw them Did you mean "everywhere"?everywhere
every where
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 places, even at the beaches, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 is full of trash. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 common reasons to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphpolluted.polluted!polluted?polluted:polluted,polluted;
polluted