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Write a paragraph of about 120 words to describe & explain why you like it.

Write a paragraph of about 120 words to describe & explain why you like it. 2xB1x

I like this picture in the first sight because of the harmony color of this picture. The layout of picture is about a girl dancing between the large garden of flower. When I see picture, it is really attract my attention because the feeling of happy from the girl. She is enjoying her freedom and her own space. No one bothers her. In addition, her pose is very relaxed and enjoyable with smile in her face. I think that's the charm of the picture. Moreover, flowers in warm and cold tones intertwine make this picture more comfortable and the blue sky very clear, so I think it was a symbol of the girl's state of mind at this time: without anxiety. That’s all the reasons why I love this photo.

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 in the first
 sight This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the harmony color of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimpressionphotographcopyartdescriptionfigure
picture
. The layout of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimpressionphotographcopyartdescriptionfigure
picture
 is about a girl dancing between the large garden of flower. When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
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picture
, it is really
Consider using a past participle here: "attracted".attracted
attract
 my attention This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the feeling of happy from the girl. She is enjoying her freedom and her This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 space. No one bothers her. In addition
, her pose is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 relaxed and enjoyable with smile in her face. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that's the charm of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimpressionphotographcopyartdescriptionfigure
picture
. Moreover
, flowers in warm and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
 tones intertwine This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withimpressionphotographcopyartdescriptionfigure
picture
 more comfortable and the blue sky This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it was a symbol of the girl's state of mind at this time: without anxiety. That’s all the reasons why I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 this photo. 