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Write a paragraph of about 120 words to describe & explain why you like it.

Write a paragraph of about 120 words to describe & explain why you like it. 2xB1x
I like this picture in the first sight because of the harmony color of this picture. The layout of picture is about a girl dancing between the large garden of flower. When I see picture, it is really attract my attention because the feeling of happy from the girl. She is enjoying her freedom and her own space. No one bothers her. In addition, her pose is very relaxed and enjoyable with smile in her face. I think that's the charm of the picture. Moreover, flowers in warm and cold tones intertwine make this picture more comfortable and the blue sky very clear, so I think it was a symbol of the girl's state of mind at this time: without anxiety. That’s all the reasons why I love this photo.
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of the harmony color of this
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. The layout of
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picture
is about a girl dancing between the large garden of flower. When I
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see
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, it is
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because
the feeling of happy from the girl. She is enjoying her freedom and her
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own
space. No one bothers her.
In addition
, her pose is
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very
relaxed and enjoyable with smile in her face. I
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think
that's the charm of the
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picture
.
Moreover
, flowers in warm and
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cold
tones intertwine
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make
this
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picture
more comfortable and the blue sky
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very
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clear
,
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I
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it was a symbol of the girl's state of mind at this time: without anxiety. That’s all the reasons why I
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love
this photo.

IELTS essay Write a paragraph of about 120 words to describe & explain why you like it.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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