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sophisticated modern technology enhance and improve people's social lives

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to flourish in the future. ddictive nature feel out of the loop isolated from society reduce crucial face-to-face interactions dramatically a damaging effect on mental health encourage a sedentary lifestyle spend quality time together connect freely and easily with no geographical barriers proximity and closeness its less likely to experience loneliness popularity will continue to flourishto flourish in the future. ddictive nature feel out of the loop isolated from society reduce crucial face-to-face interactions dramatically a damaging effect on mental health encourage a sedentary lifestyle spend quality time together connect freely and easily with no geographical barriers proximity and closeness its less likely to experience loneliness popularity will continue to flourish
to
flourish in the future.
ddictive
nature

feel out of the loop

isolated from society

reduce
crucial face-to-face interactions
dramatically


a damaging effect on mental health

encourage a sedentary lifestyle

spend quality time together

connect
freely
and
easily
with no geographical barriers

proximity and closeness

its less likely to experience loneliness

popularity will continue to
flourishto
flourish in the future.
ddictive
nature

feel out of the loop

isolated from society

reduce
crucial face-to-face interactions
dramatically


a damaging effect on mental health

encourage a sedentary lifestyle

spend quality time together

connect
freely
and
easily
with no geographical barriers

proximity and closeness

its less likely to experience loneliness

popularity will continue to
flourish
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IELTS essay sophisticated modern technology enhance and improve people's social lives

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
110 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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