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Write a paragraph of 150 words about the disadvantages of living in the city.

Write a paragraph of 150 words about the disadvantages of living in the city. oRkyD
In my point of view, living in a metropolis has at least 3 drawbacks. First of all, there is a lack of safeness since big cities tend to have higher chances of crime committing. It is really complex to control crimes and social incidents due to the fact that downtown areas contain a huge number of people, this leads to a quite hazardous life. The cost of living is also said to be another disadvantage of living in the metropolitan areas, for instance, normal living such as electricity bills or personal needs like food, drinks, gasoline are also considerably more costly. Last but not least, the absence of green place in big cities is a huge issue. As lots people are moving from the suburbs to capitals, parks and green places are being replaced with buildings for human demand. All things considered, life in large cities contain a lot of downsides.
In my point of view,
living
in a metropolis has at least 3 drawbacks.
First of all
, there is a lack of safeness since
big
cities tend to have higher chances of crime committing. It is
really
complex to control crimes and social incidents due to the fact that downtown areas contain a huge number of
people
, this leads to a quite hazardous life. The cost of
living
is
also
said to be another disadvantage of
living
in the metropolitan areas,
for instance
, normal
living
such as electricity bills or personal needs like food, drinks, gasoline are
also
considerably
more costly. Last
but
not least, the absence of green place in
big
cities is a huge issue. As lots
people
are moving from the suburbs to capitals, parks and green places are
being replaced
with buildings for human demand. All things considered, life in large cities contain
a lot of
downsides.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph of 150 words about the disadvantages of living in the city.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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