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Recall any folk/mythical/religious short story that you might have heard/seen/read as a child and discuss what you liked most about it and how do you see it now as a distinctive social/cultural text with its own moral/ideology and how does it speak to you now.

Recall any folk/mythical/religious short story that you might have heard/seen/read as a child and discuss what you liked most about it and how do you see it now as a distinctive social/cultural text with its own moral/ideology and how does it speak to you now. KwlO9
Beauty and the Beast A beautiful enchantress cloaked as an old beggar woman arrives at a castle during a ball and offers the host, a cruel and selfish prince, a rose in return for shelter from a storm. When he refuses, she reveals her identity. As punishment for the prince's lack of compassion, the enchantress transforms him into a beast and his servants into household objects. She casts a spell on the rose and warns the prince that the spell will only be broken if he learns to love another, and earn their love in return before the last petal falls, or he will remain a beast forever. Some years later, in the small town of Villeneuve, Belle, the book-loving daughter of an inventor named Maurice, dreams of adventure. She constantly brushes off advances from Gaston as he is not the type of man Belle wishes to marry. On Maurice's way to a convention and lost in the forest, he seeks refuge in the Beast's castle, but the Beast imprisons him for stealing a rose from his garden as a gift to Belle. When Maurice's horse returns without him, Belle ventures out in search for him, and finds him locked in the castle dungeon. Belle tricks both her father and the Beast by asking for a simple hug goodbye from her father, she pushes him out and locks herself in the dungeon. The Beast agrees to let her take her father's place and forces Maurice to leave immediately. Belle befriends the castle's servants, who invite her to a dinner. When she wanders into the forbidden west wing and finds the rose, the Beast scares her into the woods. She is ambushed by a pack of wolves, but the Beast rescues her, becoming injured in the process. As Belle nurses his wounds, a spark develops between them. The Beast shows Belle a gift from the enchantress, a book that transports readers wherever they want. Belle uses the book to visit her childhood home in Paris, where she discovers a plague doctor mask and realizes that she and her father were forced to leave when her mother succumbed to the plague. In Villeneuve, Maurice fails to convince the other villagers of the Beast and Belle's imprisonment. Gaston, seeing rescuing Belle as an opportunity to win her hand in marriage, agrees to help Maurice. When Maurice learns of his ulterior motive and rejects him, Gaston abandons him to be eaten by the wolves. Maurice is rescued by the town hermit Agathe, but when he tells the townsfolk of Gaston's crime and is unable to provide solid evidence, Gaston convinces them to send Maurice to an asylum. After sharing a romantic dance with the Beast, Belle discovers her father's predicament using a magic mirror. The Beast releases her to save Maurice, giving her the mirror to remember him with. Realizing that Belle loves the Beast, a jealous Gaston claims she has been charmed by dark magic, and has her thrown into the asylum carriage with her father. He rallies the villagers to follow him to the castle to slay the Beast before he curses the whole village. Inside the asylum carriage, Belle tells her father that she knows what happened to her mother and showed him the rose rattle she took from her magical visit to their home. Maurice and Belle escape, and Belle rushes back to the castle. During the battle, Gaston abandons his companion LeFou, who then sides with the servants to fend off the villagers. Gaston attacks the Beast in his tower, who is too depressed to fight back, but regains his spirit upon seeing Belle return. He defeats Gaston, but spares his life before reuniting with Belle. However, Gaston shoots the Beast from a bridge, which then collapsed as the castle began to crumble, leading Gaston to fall to his death. The Beast then dies as the last petal falls, and the servants become breathless. Belle confesses her love for the Beast and atlast everything becomes normal. The Prince and Belle host a ball for the kingdom, where they dance happily. Perspective- When I was a child I used to take this story of love as a fairytale but there is always some kind of perception inside ‘’love is only about looks what one has”. But I usually got fascinated by the romantic movies as I used to think love is all about romance and caring for each other. When we all were child we didn't knew What is love? Right. This movie show that love is one of the most beautiful feelings in the world. . . . Love is one such feeling that can be expressed in endless ways yet, cannot be defined completely in words but all I can say is that is love is to give away everything, to sacrifice everything, without the slightest desire to get anything in return. When I got matured I felt that “intelligency, inner-beauty are far more precious than looks what one perceives”. But nowadays, people consider love as to fulfill her desires instead people should have a platonic bond between each other. You all have heard about Krishna and Radha? right. For instance Radha and Krishan also share love which is platonic. Through Belle and also from my point of view, the Beast comes to understand that life is precious and meant to be cherished and shared. Life and his place in it is not a commodity to be consumed and waste forever. . At last I want to convey that we should always value inward characteristics such as kindness over other superficial qualities. In this movie Belle valued the inward characteristics of Beast, and fell in love with him despite his outward appearances that is what we all called “love”….
Beauty and the Beast

A
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beautiful
enchantress cloaked as an
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old
beggar woman arrives at a castle during a ball and offers the host, a cruel and selfish prince, a
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rose
in
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return
for shelter from a storm. When he refuses, she reveals her identity. As punishment for the prince's lack of compassion, the enchantress transforms him into a
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beast
and his
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servants
into household objects. She casts a spell on the
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rose
and warns the prince that the spell will
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only
be broken
if he learns to
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love
another, and earn their
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love
in
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return
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before
the last petal falls, or he will remain a
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beast
forever.

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Some
years later, in the
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small
town of
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Villeneuve
, Belle, the book-loving daughter of an inventor named Maurice, dreams of adventure. She
constantly
brushes off advances from Gaston as he is not the type of
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man
Belle wishes to marry. On Maurice's way to a convention and lost in the forest, he seeks refuge in the Beast's castle,
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but
the
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Beast
imprisons him for stealing a
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rose
from his garden as a gift to Belle. When Maurice's horse
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returns
without him, Belle ventures out in search for him, and finds him locked in the castle dungeon. Belle tricks both her
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father
and the
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Beast
by asking for a simple hug goodbye from her
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father
, she pushes him out and locks herself in the dungeon. The
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Beast
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agrees
to
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let
her take her father's place and forces Maurice to
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leave
immediately.

Belle befriends the castle's
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servants
, who invite her
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to a dinner
. When she wanders into the forbidden west wing and finds the
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rose
, the
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Beast
scares her into the woods. She
is ambushed
by a pack of wolves,
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but
the
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Beast
rescues her, becoming injured in the process. As Belle nurses his wounds, a spark develops between them. The
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Beast
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shows
Belle a gift from the enchantress, a book that transports readers wherever they want. Belle
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uses
the book to visit her childhood home in Paris, where she discovers a plague doctor mask and realizes that she and her
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father
were forced
to
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leave
when her mother succumbed to the plague.

In
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Villeneuve
, Maurice fails to convince the
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other
villagers of the
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Beast
and Belle's imprisonment. Gaston, seeing rescuing Belle as an opportunity to win her hand in marriage,
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agrees
to
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help
Maurice. When Maurice learns of his ulterior motive and rejects him, Gaston abandons him to
be eaten
by the wolves. Maurice
is rescued
by the town hermit
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Agathe
,
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but
when he
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tells
the townsfolk of Gaston's crime and is unable to provide solid evidence, Gaston convinces them to
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send
Maurice to an asylum.

After sharing a romantic dance with the
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Beast
, Belle discovers her father's predicament using a magic mirror. The
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Beast
releases her to save Maurice, giving her the mirror to remember him with. Realizing that Belle
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loves
the
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Beast
, a jealous Gaston claims she has
been charmed
by dark magic, and has her thrown into the asylum carriage with her
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father
. He rallies the villagers to follow him to the castle to slay the
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Beast
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before
he curses the whole village. Inside the asylum carriage, Belle
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tells
her
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father
that she knows what happened to her mother and
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showed
him the
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rose
rattle she took from her magical visit to their home. Maurice and Belle escape, and Belle rushes back to the castle.

During the battle, Gaston abandons his companion
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LeFou
, who then sides with the
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servants
to fend off the villagers. Gaston attacks the
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Beast
in his tower, who is too depressed to fight back,
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but
regains his spirit upon seeing Belle
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return
. He defeats Gaston,
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but
spares his life
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before
reuniting with Belle.
However
, Gaston shoots the
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Beast
from a bridge, which then collapsed as the castle began to crumble, leading Gaston to fall to his death. The
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Beast
then
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dies
as the last petal falls, and the
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servants
become breathless.

Belle confesses her
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love
for the
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Beast
and
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atlast
everything becomes normal. The Prince and Belle host a ball for the kingdom, where they dance
happily
.

Perspective-

When I was a child I
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used
to take this story of
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love
as a
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fairytale
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but
there is always
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kind of perception inside ‘’
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love
is
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only
about looks what one has”.
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I
usually
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got
fascinated by the romantic movies as I
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used
to
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think
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love
is all about romance and caring for each
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. When we all were child we didn't
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knew
What is
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love
? Right. This movie
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show
that
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love
is one of the most
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beautiful
feelings in the world.
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.
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Love
is one such feeling that can
be expressed
in endless ways
yet
, cannot
be defined
completely in words
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but
all I can say is
that is
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love
is to give away everything, to sacrifice everything, without the slightest desire to
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get
anything in
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return
. When I
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got
matured I felt that “
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intelligency
, inner-beauty are far more precious than looks what one perceives”.
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nowadays,
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people
consider
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as to fulfill her desires
instead
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people
should have a
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platonic
bond between each
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. You all have heard about Krishna and
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Radha
?
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and
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also
share
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love
which is
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platonic
. Through Belle and
also
from my point of view, the
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Beast
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comes
to understand that life is precious and meant to
be cherished
and shared. Life and his place in it is not a commodity to
be consumed
and waste forever.
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want to convey that we should always value inward characteristics such as kindness over
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other
superficial qualities. In this movie Belle valued the inward characteristics of
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Beast
, and fell in
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love
with him despite his outward appearances
that is
what we all called “
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love
”….
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IELTS essay Recall any folk/mythical/religious short story that you might have heard/seen/read as a child and discuss what you liked most about it and how do you see it now as a distinctive social/cultural text with its own moral/ideology and how does it speak to you now.

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