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We have too many choices in what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The above statement referred that we have too many choices is quite disputable. Some people believe that nowadays we have too many options. In this script, I will discuss about in what extent I agree and disagree with this statement. We have so many choices that is true in a great extent. With the advancement of life there have been created too many options automatically. To illustrate, if we want to buy a computer we will find many variations in computer in regards model and cost which can make us confused. Technology is one of the most incredibly invention which brings many choices in front of us. Furthermore, if we want to buy any clothes we have to meet many options which can also lead us in indecision. There are plenty of options if we move on to pick up social media. When we turn on our television we will get many options in channels. In addition, while we travel we have many choices. Disagreement with this statement seems to me less than agreement. If we count natural resources or natural beauties we are becoming deprived from choices. For instance, If we want to play in playground we are losing our lands day by day. In the sense of disagree with this statement I can say that we have not too many choices in natural perspectives. Nowadays, we have too many choices is believed by some people is debatable statement. In my opinion, I support with the people who believe that in great extent rather than disagreement.
The above
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choices
is quite disputable.
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people
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believe


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that
nowadays we have too
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many
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options
. In this script, I will
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discuss about in
what extent I
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agree
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and


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disagree
with this statement.

We have
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so
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that is
true in a great extent. With the advancement of life there have
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been


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created
too
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many
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options
automatically
. To illustrate, if we want to
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buy
a computer we will find
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many


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variations
in computer in regards model and cost which can
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make
us confused. Technology is one of
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the


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most
incredibly
invention which brings
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many
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choices
in front of us.
Furthermore
, if we want to
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buy
any

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clothes
we
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have to
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meet
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which can
also
lead us in indecision. There are
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plenty
of
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options


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if
we
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move
on to pick up social media.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
we turn on our television we will
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get
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in


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channels
.
In addition
, while we travel we have
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choices.

Disagreement with this
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seems to me less than agreement. If we count natural resources
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or


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natural
beauties we are becoming
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deprived from
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.
For instance
, If we want to play in
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playground


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we
are losing our lands day by day. In the sense of disagree with this
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I can say that we
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have


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not
too
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in natural perspectives.

Nowadays, we have too
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choices
is believed
by
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some
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people
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is
debatable
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. In my opinion,

I support with the
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people
who believe that in great extent
rather
than disagreement.
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IELTS essay We have too many choices in what extent

Essay
  American English
16 paragraphs
257 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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