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Write a paragraph describing what you would do if you only had one month to live. Explain why you are making those decisions and what they mean to you.

Write a paragraph describing what you would do if you only had one month to live. Explain why you are making those decisions and what they mean to you. q6Dqd
If I just only had one month to live, I’d rather choose to skip over the things that make me sad and focus on few things that make me satisfied. Stay along with family is the most important thing I must do first, nothing not as important as stay around with people who love you more than anything in life. Secondly, I prefer to donate all my clothes, because I just stay here for a month, I don’t need them anymore, but people who are poor than me needed them, the last meaningful action I leave for people I guest. Thirdly, meet my only best friend, I have to talk to her all the time this month, advise her don’t feel sad or depressed without me. Each life is worth it, but I don’t want to stay in this world anymore, I just leave sooner than everyone. Finally, I will feed four wild cats I had adopted, and find a new owner for them, they can’t live out there, with the disaster of coronavirus or people with dirty bloodthirsty who always stalking to steal cats for meat, I hate them and often wish they soon to receive their retribution. Even the things I do not too thrilled with somebody, but it’s so meaningful for me.
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best friend, I
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talk to her all the time this month, advise her don’t feel sad or depressed without me. Each life is worth it,
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I don’t want to
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in this world anymore, I
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sooner than everyone.
Finally
, I will feed four wild cats I had adopted, and find a new owner for them, they can’t
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live
out there, with the disaster of coronavirus or
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people
with dirty bloodthirsty who always stalking to steal cats for meat, I hate them and
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often
wish they
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to receive their retribution. Even the things I do not too thrilled with somebody,
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meaningful for me.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph describing what you would do if you only had one month to live. Explain why you are making those decisions and what they mean to you.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
215 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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