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Watching movies is good or bad

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Nowadays, most of the people are spending their board time in film. In my perspective of view watching picture is had some good advantage, where we find ourselves in relax, stressfree and lot more in addition to that will get divert from being alone. Whereas other kind of people feel that, they are wasting their precious time in film. But still I feel watching movie is good. Some therapists prescribe film as a form of treatment.
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advantage, where we find ourselves in relax,
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and lot more
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to that will
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divert from being alone. Whereas other kind of
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people
feel that, they are wasting their precious time in film.
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But
still
I feel watching movie is
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good
.
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therapists prescribe film as a form of treatment.

IELTS essay Watching movies is good or bad

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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