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Watching movies is good or bad

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Nowadays, most of the people are spending their board time in film. In my perspective of view watching picture is had some good advantage, where we find ourselves in relax, stressfree and lot more in addition to that will get divert from being alone. Whereas other kind of people feel that, they are wasting their precious time in film. But still I feel watching movie is good. Some therapists prescribe film as a form of treatment.
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feel that, they are wasting their precious time in film.
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I feel watching movie is
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therapists prescribe film as a form of treatment.
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IELTS essay Watching movies is good or bad

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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