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Write a paragraph about your lesson learned today.

Write a paragraph about your lesson learned today. L9bE3
Talk about today's lesson. First of all, I have a lot of interesting experiences. The first lesson helped me a lot in understanding a lot of new structures such as compound sentences, complex sentences, especially conditional sentences. My teacher and Mr. Martin have helped me a lot in improving my knowledge, but I still do a lot of mistakes and I will try to improve it. By getting used to the new structure, it has helped me a lot in improving my English skills especially writing and speaking skills. however; I need to improve more to make the next lesson more interesting. conclude, today's class gave me interesting lessons and it helped me better understand my knowledge.
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First of all
, I have a
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lot
of interesting experiences. The
first
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lesson
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helped
me a
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lot
in understanding a
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lot
of new structures such as compound sentences, complex sentences,
especially
conditional sentences. My teacher and Mr. Martin have
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helped
me a
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lot
in improving my knowledge,
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but
I
still
do a
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lot
of mistakes and I will try to
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improve
it. By getting
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used
to the new structure, it has
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helped
me a
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lot
in improving my English
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skills
especially
writing and speaking
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skills
.
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however
; I need to
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improve
more to
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make
the
next
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lesson
more interesting.
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conclude
,
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today
's
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class
gave me interesting
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lessons
and it
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helped
me better understand my knowledge.

IELTS essay Write a paragraph about your lesson learned today.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
117 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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