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over coming the challenge of my life

over coming the challenge of my life Kyldk

Then because of the covid epidemic, I lost my job and couldn't go anywhere. But a fortunate thing for my family was that my father's job improved and the family's economy was more stable at that time. After that I could go to school to improve my English and who know the biggest obstacle and difficulty is language. I am still trying every day with my family to have a better life, improve myself more. Thanks for listening to part of my story. sircently

Then This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid
 epidemic, I lost my job and couldn't go anywhere. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 a fortunate thing for my family was that my father's job This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 and the family's economy was more stable at that time. After that I could go to school to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my English and who know the biggest obstacle and difficulty is language. I am still
 trying every day with my family to have a better life, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 myself more. Thanks for listening to part of my story.

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