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: Write a paragraph about your job or studies. You should include: - what things are rewarding or enjoyable; - what things are difficult or stressful; - how well you are managing your stress.

: Write a paragraph about your job or studies. You should include: - what things are rewarding or enjoyable; - what things are difficult or stressful; - how well you are managing your stress. NW3eg
Currently, I am a third year student of the Banking and Finance Department of Saigon University. I'm having an interesting semester with online learning due to Covid-19. Online learning has helped me change my learning method such as being able to have more exposure to information technology, tinkering with research, actively speaking, . . . But besides that, I encountered many difficulties such as unstable network connection, easily influenced by outside influences. When studying online, the volume of exercises is also more, the test is also more difficult, which makes me very stressed. To relieve stress I have arranged a reasonable timetable for myself. Make time for relaxation, exercise, and eat right. Finally, live a positive and optimistic life.
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IELTS essay : Write a paragraph about your job or studies. You should include: - what things are rewarding or enjoyable; - what things are difficult or stressful; - how well you are managing your stress.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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