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Why do we need to wear clothes differently in different places?

Why do we need to wear clothes differently in different places? m58o1
Selection of clothes and wearing which one of clothes is a very common concern in everywhere. This problem is quite common between women especially iranian women as they do not like to wear one cloth in any places. They like always being different. I think this statement that say we should wear clothes differently in different places, is completely correct and we must to respect to it. It is very easy to explain it with an example. Suppose that we want to go to the party, if we wear a formal clothes, we creat a restriction for ourselves. At the party, we like to be feel free and do everything to have fun and pleased ourselves. When we wear a formal clothes we cannot be free. In contrary, at school or at work we must be calm and the ambient should be quiet. Also, we wear a uniform and tell to our mind we are in a formal place. Thus, we must choose clothes based on our target place. The place can effect our mind and then we can select appropriate clothes. The clothes that we are wearing can show our respect to the places we want to go.
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and wearing which one of
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is a
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common concern in everywhere. This problem is quite common between women
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iranian
women as they do not like to
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wear
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cloth
in any
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places
. They like always being
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different
.

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this statement that say we should
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wear
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clothes
differently
in
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different
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places
, is completely
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correct and
we
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must to
respect to it. It is
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easy to
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it with an example. Suppose that we want to go to the party, if we
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wear
a formal
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clothes
, we
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creat
a restriction for ourselves. At the party, we like to be feel free and do everything to have fun and
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ourselves.
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we
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wear
a formal
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we cannot be free. In contrary, at school or at work we
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must
be calm and the ambient should be quiet.
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, we
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wear
a uniform and
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tell
to our mind we are in a formal place.

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, we
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must
choose
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clothes
based on our target
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place
. The
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place
can effect our
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mind and
then we can select appropriate
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clothes
. The
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clothes
that we are wearing can
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show
our respect to the
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places
we want to go.
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IELTS essay Why do we need to wear clothes differently in different places?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
199 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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