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The Covid-19 has change our lives

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The COVID-19 pandemic is still evolving very complicatedly, we have implemented very well infection prevention methods and gradually formed a new lifestyle. The biggest change is people must wear a mask when they go out and wash their hand usually. And if they didn’t wear mask, they would be punished. With students and officer, instead of learning at school or working at office, they need to do it by online. Although it makes they feel more comfortable, but students have to watch the screen more often and that leads to decreased eyesight. Online teaching has many other disadvantages such as students don’t have mobile devices to study, the lagging of the internet, teachers can’t control what students doing through the lesson and all of that causes students won’t understand the lesson. The COVID-19 also makes people unemployed, with no job they have no money to live on, lead to society’s vices. Besides, it took the lives of many people, more than 5 million people all around the world. But thanks to working online, people only go out when necessary, don’t go out more regularly than before. It helps the recovery environment faster than ever, improve air quality, reduce greenhouse effect and noise pollution. That my opinion, thanks for reading.
The COVID-19 pandemic is
still
evolving
very
complicatedly
, we have implemented
very
well infection prevention methods and
gradually
formed a new lifestyle. The biggest
change
is
people
must
wear a mask when they go out and wash their hand
usually
. And if they didn’t wear mask, they would
be punished
. With
students
and officer,
instead
of learning at school or working at office, they need to do it by online. Although it
makes
they feel more comfortable,
but
students
have to
watch
the screen more
often
and that leads to decreased eyesight. Online teaching has
many
other disadvantages such as
students
don’t have mobile devices to study, the lagging of the internet, teachers can’t control what
students
doing through the lesson and all of that causes
students
won’t understand the lesson. The COVID-19
also
makes
people
unemployed, with no job they have no money to
live
on, lead to society’s vices.
Besides
, it took the
lives
of
many
people
, more than 5 million
people
all around the world.
But
thanks to working online,
people
only
go out when necessary, don’t go out more
regularly
than
before
. It
helps
the recovery environment faster than ever,
improve
air quality,
reduce
greenhouse effect and noise pollution. That my opinion, thanks for reading.
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IELTS essay The Covid-19 has change our lives

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