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Write a paragraph about your hobby

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One of many activities that I enjoy is playing football. I don’t known why but every time I free, I always want to play football. I usually play football with my friends at Bach Khoa stadium. We often play football every Wednesday morning and Friday afternoon when we are all free. Football give me a lot of things such as be healthier, build up the connection with my friends and a spirit of never giving up. Every time I play football I feel so relax and it seems that all the stress and pressure have disappeared. There are two basic factor that a good football player must have: physical strength and skill. I usually go for a run every morning to increase my fitness and improve my skills through training matches. I love football and I wish I could meet my idol Lionel Messi one day.
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activities that I enjoy is playing
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football
. I don’t known why
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every time I free, I always want to
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play
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football
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with my friends at Bach
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stadium. We
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every Wednesday morning and Friday afternoon when we are all free.
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Football
give me
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a lot of
things such as be healthier, build up the connection with my friends and a spirit of never giving up. Every time I
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play
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football
I feel
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so
relax and it seems that all the
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stress
and pressure have disappeared. There are two basic
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factor
that a
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good
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player
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have: physical strength and
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skill
. I
usually
go for a run every morning to increase my fitness and
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improve
my
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skills
through training matches. I
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love
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football
and I wish I could
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meet
my idol Lionel Messi one day.

IELTS essay Write a paragraph about your hobby

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
146 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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