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Describe a time when you should shared something with other

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Well, sharing is a good habit. Many times I share my things with my friends or with my sibling. Here I would like to talk about a thing which I have shared with one of my friend It's happened when I was in 12 stranded. I was share my notebook with my best friend. When she was not attend class due to serious illness. After one month she join the school and I share my all notebook with them. I was also help them by completing their projects and notebook. My all teacher said that I was a good helper and everyone appreciates me. After that I felt very happy and I also wants to help everyone in my life. So that was a situation when I shared something with my friend
Well, sharing is a
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good
habit.
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Many
times I share my things with my
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friends
or with my sibling. Here I would like to talk about a thing which I have shared with one of my
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friend
It's happened when I was in 12 stranded. I was share my notebook with my best
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friend
.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
she was not
Consider using a past participle here: "attended".
attend
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class
due to serious illness. After one month she
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "joins", "joined".
join
the school and I share my all notebook with them. I was
also
Consider using a past participle here: "helped".
help
them by completing their projects and notebook. My all teacher said that I was a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
helper and everyone appreciates me. After that I felt
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very
happy and I
also
The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "want"
wants
to
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help
everyone in my life.
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So
that was a situation when I shared something with my
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friend

IELTS essay Describe a time when you should shared something with other

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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