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Describe a time when you should shared something with other

Describe a time when you should shared something with other yP953

Well, sharing is a good habit. Many times I share my things with my friends or with my sibling. Here I would like to talk about a thing which I have shared with one of my friend It's happened when I was in 12 stranded. I was share my notebook with my best friend. When she was not attend class due to serious illness. After one month she join the school and I share my all notebook with them. I was also help them by completing their projects and notebook. My all teacher said that I was a good helper and everyone appreciates me. After that I felt very happy and I also wants to help everyone in my life. So that was a situation when I shared something with my friend

Well, sharing is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 habit. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 times I share my things with my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friends
 or with my sibling. Here I would like to talk about a thing which I have shared with one of my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
 It's happened when I was in 12 stranded. I was share my notebook with my best You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 she was not Consider using a past participle here: "attended".attended
attend
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 due to serious illness. After one month she The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "joins", "joined".joinsjoined
join
 the school and I share my all notebook with them. I was also
Consider using a past participle here: "helped".helped
help
 them by completing their projects and notebook. My all teacher said that I was a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 helper and everyone appreciates me. After that I felt This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy and I also
The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "want"want
wants
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 everyone in my life. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 that was a situation when I shared something with my Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfriend.friend!friend?friend:friend,friend;
friend