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At MIT, we bring people together to better the lives of others. MIT students work to improve their communities in different ways, from tackling the world’s biggest challenges to being a good friend. Describe one way in which you have contributed to your community, whether in your family, the classroom, your neighborhood, etc. (200–250 words)

At MIT, we bring people together to better the lives of others. MIT students work to improve their communities in different ways, from tackling the world’s biggest challenges to being a good friend. Describe one way in which you have contributed to your community, whether in your family, the classroom, your neighborhood, etc. (200–250 words) eeGJV
For some students, calculus is a hard section of mathematics. My teacher effectively taught us might be some students became confused and couldn’t solve questions. I pointed out some common issues and started working on them. I'd made different groups helped them along with my teacher. I shared my strategies and my materials with them which I used while studying. Slowly, they started to come over their problems. I felt happy that I could help them. In my neighborhood, rural people don't have money to give better education to their children, I give them my books which help to study for a bright future, and give them free education. Perhaps, they can become a better person in life to change society with new ideas. Occasionally
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section of mathematics. My teacher
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some
students became confused and couldn’t solve questions. I pointed out
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common issues and
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working on them. I'd made
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different
groups
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helped
them along with my teacher.
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shared my strategies and my materials with them which I
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used
while studying.
Slowly
, they
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started
to
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come
over their problems. I felt happy that I could
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help
them.

In my neighborhood, rural
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people
don't have money to give better education to their children, I give them my books which
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help
to study for a bright future, and give them free education. Perhaps, they can become a better person in life to
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change
society with new
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ideas
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IELTS essay At MIT, we bring people together to better the lives of others. MIT students work to improve their communities in different ways, from tackling the world’s biggest challenges to being a good friend. Describe one way in which you have contributed to your community, whether in your family, the classroom, your neighborhood, etc. (200–250 words)

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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