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Nowadays the popularity of solar energy increases dramatically all over the world. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays the popularity of solar energy increases dramatically all over the world. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development? oE9Pg
It is argued that today 'world the fame of systems which are pertaning solar energy raises sharply. This essay will first examine that the biggest reason by this phenomenon is natural sources decreasing and then submit focusing its positive impact on environment. As human population boosts, people 'necessities that must be met increases inevitably, For this reason, natural sources in the world where we strive to survive have been employed by humankind who is cruel against to environment. Depending on this, the foremost cause by solar energy system like solar panels is declining natural sources in the environment. For example, the coals for the purpose of central heating in the apartments in Finland have not used for around 12 years because solar systems used by dwellers replaced it by taking into consideration natural sources diminishing. In terms of expenses, it is certain that solar energy has influence on people 'budgets positively. As solar system is not only environmentally friendly but one of the cheaper ways for heating. Therefore, people who take advantage of it have not pay money so much. For instance. environmental office in Belgium reported that both the percentage of perilous gases such as carbon monoxide, carbon dioxide emitted by countries and money spent by people for heating abated significantly in 2012 compared previous year. To sum up, one of the most prominent reason for utilizing solar energy is natural sources which are lessening day by day and the most spectacular occasion which is demonstrating why it is a positive improvement is not so expensive for people who use it.
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raises
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first
examine that the biggest reason by this phenomenon is
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natural
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sources
decreasing and then submit focusing its
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positive
impact on environment.

As human population boosts,
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people
'necessities that
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must
be met
increases
inevitably
,
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,
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natural
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sources
in the world where we strive to survive have
been employed
by humankind who is cruel against to environment. Depending on this, the foremost cause by
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solar
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energy
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system
like
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solar
panels is declining
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natural
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sources
in the environment.

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, the coals for the purpose of central heating in the apartments in Finland have not
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used
for around 12 years
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because
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solar
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systems
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used
by dwellers replaced it by taking into consideration
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natural
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sources
diminishing.

In terms of expenses, it is certain that
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solar
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energy
has influence on
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people
'budgets
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.

As
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only
environmentally
friendly
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but
one of the cheaper ways for heating.

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,
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people
who take advantage of it have not pay money
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much.

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environmental
office in Belgium reported that both the percentage of perilous gases such as carbon monoxide, carbon dioxide emitted by countries and money spent by
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people
for heating abated
significantly
in 2012 compared previous year.

To sum up, one of the most prominent reason for utilizing
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solar
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energy
is
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natural
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sources
which are lessening day by day and the most spectacular occasion which is demonstrating why it is a
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positive
improvement is not
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so
expensive for
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people
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use
it.
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IELTS essay Nowadays the popularity of solar energy increases dramatically all over the world. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?

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