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Tell us about a time when you faced with a challenge in your life andhow you overcame the problem?

Tell us about a time when you faced with a challenge in your life andhow you overcame the problem? mWp2d
There were some difficult periods to pass for me. I was a schoolgirl who had the biggest dreams like studying abroad with full scholarship and having great career path and making my parents proud of me. However, day by day I came across problems connecting to financial budget of my family. As my father was not in a good health condition, there were some challenges to reach my goals. The first requirement of international universities was IELTS certificate with 7 band score, I prepared for the exam from the bottom of my heart. Unfortunately, I could not afford to exam fee. However, I did not give up and tried hard to achieve success. Instead of IELTS, I took CEFR examination and passed successfully. Then entered to our national university with a full scholarship. Even though I could not go abroad, I am getting high education there and preparing to study abroad for masters degree.
There were
some
difficult periods to pass for me. I was a schoolgirl who had the biggest dreams like studying abroad with full scholarship and having great career path and making my parents proud of me.
However
, day by day I came across problems connecting to financial budget of my family. As my father was not in a
good
health condition, there were
some
challenges to reach my goals. The
first
requirement of international universities was IELTS certificate with 7 band score, I prepared for the exam from the bottom of my heart. Unfortunately, I could not afford to exam fee.
However
, I did not give up and tried
hard
to achieve success.
Instead
of IELTS, I took CEFR examination and passed
successfully
. Then entered to our national university with a full scholarship.
Even though
I could not go abroad, I am getting high education there and preparing to study abroad for
masters
degree.
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IELTS essay Tell us about a time when you faced with a challenge in your life andhow you overcame the problem?

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