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Write a paragraph about what life in the city is like

Write a paragraph about what life in the city is like 8dkk5
Life in a city is a really busy life. People who live i a big cities their life is different from the poeple who live in a contryside. Earlt in the morning hundreds of the people rush out of thier home in the manner ants do when theinest is broken. Soon the street are full tracffic. As you can see, city in a place with advantage and dis advantage. About advantage, there are a lot jobs, entertainment, morder universities, hopital, . . etc. Beside advantage, there are some disadvantage. First, the city has suffer from health problem, diseases related to poor air quality and sources of polluted water. Second, prices and costs of living are expensive in a big cities. Third, the enviroment in the city is rife with social evils. To recap, the city is place always busy, but it's wworth making discover, experience life. Let give me more opportunities
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. About
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph about what life in the city is like

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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