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the literacy rate for both males and females in 2011

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The data shows the literacy rate for both males and females in seven different regions of the world in 2011. The horizontal axis lists the regions and the vertical axis shows percentage. In all regions except two, there is a difference in the literacy rates of men and women. Central Asia and Central/Eastern Europe have the highest percentage of citizens who can read and write. Almost 100% of men and women are literate in those regions. The lowest literacy rates are in Sub-Saharan Africa. In five out of the seven regions, there are different literacy rates for men and women. The greatest difference between men and women is found in South and West Asia. In this region, about 80% of men are able to read and write, but only about 60% of women. Overall, the difference between the most literate area and the least literate is about 30% for men and just over 40% for wonmen. In conclusion, literacy rates vary between regions, with males having higher levels than females in most regions.
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for both males and females in seven
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of the world in 2011. The horizontal axis lists the
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and the vertical axis
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percentage. In all
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except two, there is a difference in the
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of
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and women.

Central Asia and Central/Eastern Europe
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the highest percentage of citizens who can read and write. Almost 100% of
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and
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are literate in those
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. The lowest
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are in Sub-Saharan Africa.

In five out of the seven
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, there are
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. The greatest difference between
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and
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in South and West Asia. In this
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, about 80% of
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are able to read and write,
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about 60% of
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.
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, the difference between the most literate area and the least literate is about 30% for
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and
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over 40% for
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In conclusion
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vary between
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, with males having higher levels than females in most
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IELTS essay the literacy rate for both males and females in 2011

Essay
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