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decribes your living room

decribes your living room 5aREN
My house has many rooms but perhaps the most beautiful is the living room. But the living room is the room I want to talk about most. The floor and part of the wall are covered with light brown and white ceramic tiles. The upper walls and ceiling are painted in light blue and white. Therefore, we feel the room is very bright and airy. There is a dark brown sofa set and a glass table opposite the sofa. Besides, there is a large artificial flower pot, each flower branch is a different color and below the flower branches there are many kinds of leaves. Next is a mirror about 1. 6 meters high and near the corner is a wash basin.
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I want to talk about most. The floor and part of the wall
are covered
with light brown and white ceramic tiles. The upper walls and ceiling
are painted
in light blue and white.
Therefore
, we feel the
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room
is
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very
bright and airy. There is a dark brown sofa set and a glass table opposite the sofa.
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, there is a large artificial flower pot, each flower branch is a
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different
color and below the flower branches there are
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is a mirror about 1. 6 meters high and near the corner is a wash basin.
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IELTS essay decribes your living room

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
122 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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