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Write a paragraph about the company you would like to work for after graduation

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After graduating university, I would like to work for Google. The headquarter of Google is called Googleplex and it’s located in Mountain View, California, the USA. Google does not yet have an official office in Vietnam and their Southeast Asia headquarters are located in Singapore. Google is an American multinational technology company that specializes in Internet-related services and products, which include online advertising technologies, a search engine, cloud computing, software, and hardware. I want to apply for Growth Marketing Manager position in the marketing department. I want to work for Google beacause it has a number of aspects I like about. I would like to contribute my approaches and at the same time learn from others and grow. I hope to get a chance to make a positive impact in one way or the other.
After
graduating
university, I would like to work for Google. The
headquarter
of Google
is called
Googleplex
and it’s located in Mountain View, California, the USA. Google does not
yet
have an official office in Vietnam and their Southeast Asia headquarters
are located
in Singapore. Google is an American multinational technology
company
that specializes in Internet-related services and products, which include online advertising technologies, a search engine, cloud computing, software, and hardware. I want to apply for Growth Marketing Manager position in the marketing department. I want to work for Google
beacause
it has a number of aspects I like about.
I
would like to contribute my approaches and at the same time learn from others and grow.
I
hope to
get
a chance to
make
a
positive
impact in one way or the other.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph about the company you would like to work for after graduation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
135 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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