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EFFECTIVENESS ON AN ONLINE TOOL

EFFECTIVENESS ON AN ONLINE TOOL ORXQd
This is a test writing on this electronic tool to asses the writing band score for IELTS. The expectation is quite high on this tool because there are no available tool that can estimate the band score properly along with a text box. Anyway, there are no visible word counter in this tool. But maybe there is one to count the words and provide a constructive assessment. Firstly, the tool is showing an error because the writing is not big enough and doesn't qualify for the assessment. So, I'm writing more to make it large enough so that I can get a constructive feedback on my writing so that the band score is plausible. Secondly, the assessment is not fully trustworthy because it's just an online tool that contains background processing based on the existing models. However, it is expected that at least the tool will provide accurate feedback on grammatical mistakes, cohesion, and spelling errors. But it's highly likely that someone will get comprehensive review based on writing engagement.
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on this electronic
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tool
to asses the
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writing
band score for IELTS. The expectation is quite high on this
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tool
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because
there are no available
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tool
that can estimate the band score
properly
along with a text box. Anyway, there are no visible word
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counter
in this
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tool
.
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But
maybe there is one to count the words and provide a constructive assessment.
Firstly
, the
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tool
is showing an error
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because
the
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writing
is not
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big
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enough
and doesn't qualify for the assessment.
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, I'm
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more to
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make
it large
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enough
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so
that I can
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get
a constructive feedback on my
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writing
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so
that the band score is plausible.
Secondly
, the assessment is not
fully
trustworthy
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because
it's
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just
an online
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tool
that contains background processing based on the existing models.
However
, it is
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expected
that at least the
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tool
will provide accurate feedback on grammatical mistakes, cohesion, and spelling errors.
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But
it's
highly
likely that someone will
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get
comprehensive review based on
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writing
engagement.
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IELTS essay EFFECTIVENESS ON AN ONLINE TOOL

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
170 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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