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Write a paragraph about personal statement for a job or university application.

Write a paragraph about personal statement for a job or university application. 0MWDO

From the first beginning I knew that I love creating. Creating with colors, with paper, everything that came to my hands it become something else. by the time I was 6 I had my own collection but when my school start I drop my passion. I didn't completely abandon my passion and collection to collect dust where in my room, somewhere below my heart I always missed my childhood. After the primary school I still hadn’t have a perfect picture from my future for 3 years but today I have better picture. There still are some Confucians but let's be that optimistic. I know I love mathematic, cars and I can imagine my life without art. Art is the food of my soul. I always thought I can't have all of them tougher but today I figured out what career is going to be? Remember I said that I love cars so how about car designing or mechanical designing they are almost the sane but deference is in the first one I create cars but in the second one I create mostly robots. I am truly joyful that today I'm not lost with confusion about choosing my study field I can start building my future from now.

From the first
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love
 creating. Creating with colors, with paper, everything that came to my hands it Did you mean "becomes"?becomes
become
 something else. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBy
by
 the time I was 6 I had my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 collection This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when my school This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 I drop my passion. I didn't completely abandon my passion and collection to collect dust where in my room, somewhere below my heart I always missed my childhood. After the primary school I still
Did you mean "hadn’t had"?hadn’t had
hadn’t have
 a perfect picture from my future for 3 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 I have better picture.

There still
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 Confucians This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
's be that optimistic. I know I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 mathematic, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 and I can imagine my life without art. Art is the food of my soul. I always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 I can't have all of them tougher This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 I figured out what career is going to be?

Remember I said that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 how about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 designing or mechanical designing they are almost the sane This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 deference is in the first
 one I create You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in the second one I create mostly
 robots.

I am truly
 joyful that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 I'm not lost with confusion about choosing my study field I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 building my future from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. 