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"Some people think that cats are better than dogs" Do you agree or disagree?.

"Some people think that cats are better than dogs" . DVllj
To this day there has always been a discussion between people who think that cats are better than dogs. I agree that cats are better than dogs. In this case I would say they are much more independent, in terms of they don't need anyone to go and relieve themselves. Also, if you treat them with affection they will give you the same treatment by supporting you and being there because they know how you are feeling. Before all else, the responsibility of having a cat is not as easy as you may think, but is more controllable than having a dog. Cats need little care, in general a cat requires less attention and time than a dog. For example, not only do you get rid of taking it for a walk, you also have to bathe it less. In addition, its diet is related to its size, so it can be less expensive than that of a large dog if that's the case. In the second place, another idea that people have of cats is that they are boring compared to dogs, but you can not only say this if you have not had the opportunity to live with a cat for a long time period. This is just a false myth, when in reality it is about a free-spirited animals that, treated with love, are faithful and loving, as loyal as a dog. They have their own language to show tenderness. For example, they caress you with their body as a show of affection, while dogs often lick. To conclude, If you ever need to decide whether to have a cat or a dog, keep in mind that cats are quiet and calm, but not boring, they just need less space, and their desire for independence will make you love them more and more.
To this day there has always been a discussion between
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that cats are better than
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. I
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that cats are better than
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.
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anyone to go and relieve themselves.
Also
, if you treat them with affection they will give you the same treatment by supporting you and being there
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they know how you are feeling.

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all else, the responsibility of having a cat is not as easy as you may
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think
,
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is more controllable than having a
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dog
. Cats
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need
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care,
in general
a cat requires
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less
attention and time than a
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dog
.
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, not
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do you
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rid of taking it for a walk, you
also
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bathe it
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less
.
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, its diet
is related
to its size,
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it can be
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expensive than that of a large
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if that's the case.

In the second place, another
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that
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have of cats is that they are boring compared to
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,
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you can not
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say this if you have not had the opportunity to
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with a cat for a long time period. This is
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a false myth, when in reality it is about a free-spirited animals that, treated with
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, are faithful and loving, as loyal as a
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dog
. They have their
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own
language to
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show
tenderness.
For example
, they caress you with their body as a
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show
of affection, while
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dogs
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often
lick.

To conclude
, If you ever
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need
to decide whether to have a cat or a
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dog
,
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keep
in mind that cats are quiet and calm,
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not boring, they
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need
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less
space, and their desire for independence will
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you
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them more and more.
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IELTS essay "Some people think that cats are better than dogs" .

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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