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Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.

Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives. 55WVP
Politics is no game, win or lose, it hurts everyone. The ones that have the power, the power to either make or break our governments are the ones in charge – and we mustn’t leave them to their own devices. The prompts put forward two opinions, and I mostly agree with the first view for three reasons as it states that, for an effective governance, the political leaders should give in to the public opinion. However, I concede with the second view when there are extreme cases where a leader must not surrender to the masses wishes. Firstly, leaders who don’t yield often make rash decisions that plunge the country into chaos. A paragon in this case, Adolf Hitler. When he was in power, his absolute leadership and rules dragged Germany through the mud. If it wasn’t the gruelling end of World War II, Adolf Hitler could have unfathomably ruined the face of Germany forever. His mortifying decisions and even so horrible principles left Germans in nothing but a dilapidated state of despair. His despotic rulership still brings chills down our spine for his ruthless ideals and morals put people through absolute hell. Here, the view of a leader following the “my way or highway” route resulted in years of trauma for the people subjected to it. In autocratic dictator settings, having the leader follow only his objectives and not have any room for public opinion can hurt this leader and its country for years to heal. Secondly, by definition, a functioning democracy works on the basis of an open line of communication for conveying people's message. The phrase ‘government of the people, by the people, for the people’ emphasizes this idea even further. Leaders who give into this idea and agree to follow the masses' opinions, it should lead them to a longer tenure of their electorate. The longer the leader does stay, the more effective their plans for their people will be. The longer the leader stays, the longer he can reinforce his own plans for the nation and inturn help the nation do exponentially well. Albeit, there are times when the leader should take a call between their principles or the general opinion and a good leader is on that knows when to choose theirs over the other common idea proposed. For example, the covid-19 pandemic swept most nations with a pernicious wave and have left most nations around the world in shackles due to the lockdown restrictions. The compulsory mask mandate and the nation-wide lockdown exacerbated the situations for the people as the impediments caused by it were copious. The backlash in the form of protest was raging like wildfire all over the world. However, initially however polarising the public's opinion about this covid restriction was, later the shift to a positive opinion from the masses was a significant relief to the political leaders and the healthcare system. It was celebrated by people as a difficult byt necessary move taken to relieve the stress on the already stressed health sector. Adversity being yet another ideal litmus test for an effective leader, proves how the political leaders sticking to their principles for a devastating situation as such was judicious and even more life saving for their countries. In summary, having a leader who chooses their people's wishes or their own principles and makes the right choice according to the situation, wins the day. However, this argument being a complex one rests on its circumstances to make an ideal decision. Leaning towards submitting into the peoples wishes at last, the choice of our political leaders today shapes our tomorrow.
Politics is no game, win or lose, it hurts everyone. The
ones
that have the power, the power to either
make
or break our
governments
are the
ones
in charge
and we mustn’t
leave
them to their
own
devices. The prompts put forward two
opinions
, and I
mostly
agree
with the
first
view for three reasons as it states that, for an effective governance, the political
leaders
should give in to the public
opinion
.
However
, I concede with the second view when there are extreme cases where a
leader
must
not surrender to the masses wishes.

Firstly
,
leaders
who don’t yield
often
make
rash decisions that plunge the country into chaos. A paragon
in this case
, Adolf Hitler. When he was in power, his absolute leadership and
rules
dragged Germany through the mud. If it wasn’t the
gruelling
end
of World War II, Adolf Hitler could have
unfathomably
ruined the face of Germany forever. His mortifying decisions and even
so
horrible
principles
left
Germans in nothing
but
a dilapidated state of despair. His despotic
rulership
still
brings chills down our spine for his ruthless ideals and morals put
people
through absolute hell. Here, the view of a
leader
following the “my way or highway” route resulted in years of trauma for the
people
subjected to it. In autocratic dictator settings, having the
leader
follow
only
his objectives and not have any room for public
opinion
can hurt this
leader
and its country for years to heal.

Secondly
, by definition, a functioning democracy works on the basis of an open line of communication for conveying
people
's message. The phrase ‘
government
of the
people
, by the
people
, for the
people’
emphasizes this
idea
even
further
.
Leaders
who give into this
idea
and
agree
to follow the masses'
opinions
, it should lead them to a
longer
tenure of their electorate. The
longer
the
leader
does stay, the more effective their plans for their
people
will be. The
longer
the
leader
stays, the
longer
he can reinforce his
own
plans for the
nation
and
inturn
help
the
nation
do
exponentially
well.

Albeit, there are times when the
leader
should take a call between their
principles
or the general
opinion
and a
good
leader
is on that knows when to choose theirs over the other common
idea
proposed.
For example
, the
covid-19
pandemic swept most
nations
with a pernicious wave and have
left
most
nations
around the world in shackles due to the lockdown restrictions. The compulsory mask mandate and the nation-wide lockdown exacerbated the situations for the
people
as the impediments caused by it were copious. The backlash in the form of protest was raging like wildfire all over the world.
However
,
initially
however
polarising
the public's
opinion
about this
covid
restriction was, later the shift to a
positive
opinion
from the masses was a significant relief to the political
leaders
and the healthcare system. It
was celebrated
by
people
as a difficult
byt
necessary
move
taken to relieve the
stress
on the already
stressed
health sector. Adversity being
yet
another ideal litmus
test
for an effective
leader
, proves how the political
leaders
sticking to their
principles
for a devastating situation as such was judicious and even more life saving for their countries.

In summary, having a
leader
who chooses their
people
's wishes or their
own
principles
and
makes
the right choice according to the situation, wins the day.
However
, this argument being a complex one rests on its circumstances to
make
an ideal decision. Leaning towards submitting into the
peoples
wishes at last, the choice of our political
leaders
today
shapes our tomorrow.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.

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