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Write a paragraph about one of your most memorable experiences.

Write a paragraph about one of your most memorable experiences. OyD0j
In daily life, everyone has their own experiences and so do I. Sneaking out of my home is my most memorable experience. It just happened a few months ago. My friend asked me to go out, and my mother did not agree because of the covid 19 pandemic. But due to my playfulness, I sneaked my mother out of the house and hang out until 10pm. I didn't want to be bothered by my mother's calls, so I turned off the phone. When I returned home, I found my mother waiting at the door with a very worried look on her face. Mom didn't scold me as I expected, but she told me to rethink my actions. After that, my brother told me that my mother asked many people to find me, even the police. I felt so sorry for making her worry so much, so that night I apologized to her and promised there wouldn't be a next time. And after that, I never did it again. It was an experience that left a deep impression on me
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experiences and
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do I. Sneaking out of my home is my most memorable experience. It
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just
happened a few months ago. My friend asked me to go out, and my
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mother
did not
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agree
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because
of the
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covid 19
pandemic.
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But
due to my playfulness, I sneaked my
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mother
out of the
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house
and hang out until 10pm. I didn't want to
be bothered
by my mother's calls,
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so
I turned off the phone. When I returned home, I found my
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mother
waiting at the door with a
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very
worried look on her face. Mom didn't scold me as I
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expected
,
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but
she
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told
me to rethink my actions. After that, my brother
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told
me that my
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mother
asked
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many
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people
to find me, even the police. I felt
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so
sorry for making her worry
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so
much,
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so
that night I apologized to her and promised there wouldn't be a
next
time. And after that, I never did it again. It was an experience that
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left
a deep impression on
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me

IELTS essay Write a paragraph about one of your most memorable experiences.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
178 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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