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Ujj hteyenybeyenybet te tte tt e tets t tt te t te t yee yey e yyy d6 y 6d 6e 6 d

Ujj hteyenybeyenybet te tte tt e tets t tt te t te t yee yey e yyy d6 y 6d 6e 6 d Yd7lm
In conclusion, I believe unemployment can have detrimental effects upon both society and the youth, but administrative interventions can prevent such atrocious repercussions. In conclusion, I believe unemployment can have detrimental effects upon both society and the youth, but administrative interventions can prevent such atrocious repercussions. In conclusion, I believe unemployment can have detrimental effects upon both society and the youth, but administrative interventions can prevent such atrocious repercussions. In conclusion, I believe unemployment can have detrimental effects upon both society and the youth, but administrative interventions can prevent such atrocious repercussions. In conclusion, I believe unemployment can have detrimental effects upon both society and the youth, but administrative interventions can prevent such atrocious repercussions. In conclusion, I believe unemployment can have detrimental effects upon both society and the youth, but administrative interventions can prevent such atrocious repercussions. In conclusion, I believe unemployment can have detrimental effects upon both society and the youth, but administrative interventions can prevent such atrocious repercussions. In conclusion, I believe unemployment can have detrimental effects upon both society and the youth, but administrative interventions can prevent such atrocious repercussions.
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society
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youth
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conclusion
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believe
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unemployment
can have
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society
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youth
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believe
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unemployment
can have
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detrimental
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society
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youth
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conclusion
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believe
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unemployment
can have
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detrimental
effects upon both
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society
and the
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youth
,
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but
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atrocious
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repercussions
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conclusion
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believe
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unemployment
can have
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detrimental
effects upon both
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society
and the
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youth
,
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but
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atrocious
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repercussions
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conclusion
, I
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believe
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unemployment
can have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
detrimental
effects upon both
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
youth
,
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but
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administrative
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interventions
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prevent


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atrocious
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repercussions
. In
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conclusion
, I
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believe
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unemployment
can have
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detrimental
effects upon both
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society
and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
youth
,
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but
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administrative
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interventions
can
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prevent


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IELTS essay Ujj hteyenybeyenybet te tte tt e tets t tt te t te t yee yey e yyy d6 y 6d 6e 6 d

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
184 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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