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My favourite subject is English. It is simple and enjoyable to study it every day. English is used extensively in both education and daily life. There are numerous reasons to enjoy it. Firstly, English is a global language. It is well-liked and easy to use. I have access to a wealth of information and news around the world. I can communicate with international pals by using English. Furthermore, English documents are a more precise and authentic source of data. Secondly, English is useful for my work. I have many opportunities. When I have decent English skills, I can join international organizations and multi-national corporations. Besides, I can have a higher salary than others with the same job. To sum up, English is really necessary in our lives. It is an interesting subject in my school and plays an important role in my future. I adore the English language.
My
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favourite
subject is English. It is simple and enjoyable to study it every day. English is
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used
extensively
in both education and daily life. There are numerous reasons to enjoy it.
Firstly
, English is a global language. It is well-liked and easy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
. I have access to a wealth of information and news around the world. I can communicate with international pals by using English.
Furthermore
, English documents are a more precise and authentic source of data.
Secondly
, English is useful for my work. I have
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many
opportunities. When I have decent English
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
international organizations and multi-national corporations.
Besides
, I can have a higher salary than others with the same job. To sum up, English is
really
necessary in our
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lives
. It is an interesting subject in my school and plays an
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important
role in my future. I adore the English language.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph about my favourite subject

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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