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The diagran below shows the life cycle of glass and plastic with recycling.

The diagran below shows the life cycle of glass and plastic with recycling. q0mJa

It is clearly seen that, first of all glass and plastic will be collected and after 5-10 days material will be transported for recycling centre by truck after which plastic will be choosed according to thickness and quality and color as well glass will be crushed after crushing it will washed into container. Moreover, plastic will be melted and reshaping into two separate machines, and after reshaping plastic will be converted into new product along with after 3-8 weeks new product will be converted waste material. Analyzing it further, plastic will be choosed by quality and it will be converted into bundling then it will shredling in the same machine along with it will be ready fir new product as well after 3-8 weeks, plastic will be choosed by collection. Overall, there are various steps for recycling ranging from, collection, washing to new product.

It is clearly
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Analyzing it further
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choosed
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product
as well
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Overall
, there are various steps for recycling ranging from, collection, washing to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
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product
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