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Examine the argument in favour and against of animals experiment. Discuss both views and give conclusion.

Examine the argument in favour and against of animals experiment. 73j8A
In this burgeoning the epoch of science and technlogy the contempoary human dwells in the world which is eventually shaped by tha latest trends and approaches. The current topic against of animal experiment can be explained future by careful consideration that intimately evaluate the topic there are opposing view to every stance and this topic is no different. I would like put forth my case that provide a detail account of this quote. There are myriad consequence in favour of animal experiment. My case can be started with a great assistance that popular culture has taken over tha world. In addition there is no denying tha fact that popularity has responsible for this. However another point of view cannot be ignored which also give us valueable information. In, conclusion we can say that although there are many advantage and disadvantage of this quote but its advantage is overweight to its disadvantage If we look at the other side of issue we understand the versatile of television that provide a information along side of issue. Consequently one can confidently television has a great impact on people lives. Television is a great source to get the information along side of issue and all around us.
In this burgeoning the epoch of science and
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technlogy
the
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contempoary
human dwells in the world which is
eventually
shaped by
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tha
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latest
trends and approaches. The
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current
topic against of animal experiment can be
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explained
future by careful consideration that
intimately
evaluate the topic there are opposing view to every stance and this topic is no
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different
. I would like put forth my case that provide a detail account of this quote.

There are myriad consequence in
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favour
of animal experiment. My case can be
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started
with a great assistance that popular culture has taken over
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tha
world. In
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addition
there is no denying
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tha
fact that popularity has responsible for this.
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However
another point of view cannot be
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ignored
which
also
give us
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valueable
information.

In, conclusion we can say that although there are
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many advantage
and disadvantage of this quote
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but
its advantage is overweight to its disadvantage

If we look at the other side of issue we understand
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the versatile of
television that provide
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
information
Did you mean "alongside"?
along side
of issue.
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Consequently
one can
confidently
television has a great impact on
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people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
lives
. Television is a great source to
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get
the information
Did you mean "alongside"?
along side
of issue and all around us.
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IELTS essay Examine the argument in favour and against of animals experiment.

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3 paragraphs
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